Hoarder House
Not Neighborly Neighbor6 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written story you have penned for the not so neighborly neighbor. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This is a very interesting and well written story you have penned for the not so neighborly neighbor. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind words and for the great review. I appreciate both.
Comment from JT traveller
Oh my! He tried to shoot you?!
I'd be having more than one shot of Bourbon after that incident.
I would have been raging over what happened to you following the incident. Where is the justice in this world?
Just a small suggestion,
"My house got sold..."
Was instead of got.
A compelling read and definitely a top contender for the competition. This is the best entry I have read yet.
Amazing that Hammurabi's Code exists in a lot of our minds to this very day.
Great work.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Oh my! He tried to shoot you?!
I'd be having more than one shot of Bourbon after that incident.
I would have been raging over what happened to you following the incident. Where is the justice in this world?
Just a small suggestion,
"My house got sold..."
Was instead of got.
A compelling read and definitely a top contender for the competition. This is the best entry I have read yet.
Amazing that Hammurabi's Code exists in a lot of our minds to this very day.
Great work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and suggestion. I appreciate both.
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My pleasure. Jacqueline 😊
Comment from Zinnia48
Wow! This had me captured until the very end. And speaking of ending, I had no idea! You crafted a compelling story, and told it well. Thank you! zinnia
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Wow! This had me captured until the very end. And speaking of ending, I had no idea! You crafted a compelling story, and told it well. Thank you! zinnia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. I appreciate them.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a tragic fictional story but also very factual. I have no idea how someone can live with lots of junk surrounding a home. Besides a fire hazard it will also bring in wild animals which are not wanted.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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What a tragic fictional story but also very factual. I have no idea how someone can live with lots of junk surrounding a home. Besides a fire hazard it will also bring in wild animals which are not wanted.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. I appreciate them.
Comment from royowen
Obviously with a name like Uncle Tony, he would be a fixer of things, but in a sense, he was fighting 'fire with fire', a wonderful post, and a very good reminder not to live in a small town, if you are an out of Towner. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Obviously with a name like Uncle Tony, he would be a fixer of things, but in a sense, he was fighting 'fire with fire', a wonderful post, and a very good reminder not to live in a small town, if you are an out of Towner. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. I really appreciate them.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job telling this story! I was captivated, though I never could have predicted that ending! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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You did a great job telling this story! I was captivated, though I never could have predicted that ending! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. I really appreciate them.
