The Right Path.
A rhyming poem.3 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
This poem warns of the dangers of trusting charlatans. I have personal experience of this and know it can be extremely perilous. Like Beecher, I am now happy attending church.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This poem warns of the dangers of trusting charlatans. I have personal experience of this and know it can be extremely perilous. Like Beecher, I am now happy attending church.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you for the stars and kind review. I'm glad you found a nice church.
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You're welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds a it scary, like a horror movie perhaps? You have a few gremlins inside your poem that need removing. Exorcising demons makes me think of practices from long ago, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This sounds a it scary, like a horror movie perhaps? You have a few gremlins inside your poem that need removing. Exorcising demons makes me think of practices from long ago, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Maybe attracted a gremlin. The small picture turned into a page size wash with a transporter malfunction, edit insisted on substituting a gibberish word, and advanced editor snatched away chunks of saved print from top and base. Likely best not to trouble the negative realm, I suppose. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from RodG
Reminiscent of the book THE EXORCIST, this poem was fun to read. We are glad to see Beecher got rid of his demon and has been converted into a church-goer. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Reminiscent of the book THE EXORCIST, this poem was fun to read. We are glad to see Beecher got rid of his demon and has been converted into a church-goer. Rod
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
