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Comment from royowen
I wrote a poem for my wife sometime again and the first line says, "Your name is written on the wind" now "your ashes are borne on the wind." Beautifully written dear Gypsy, a great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I wrote a poem for my wife sometime again and the first line says, "Your name is written on the wind" now "your ashes are borne on the wind." Beautifully written dear Gypsy, a great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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A pleasure
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very lovely and well written 3-7-6 haiku poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Gypsy, This is a very lovely and well written 3-7-6 haiku poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, this is a good haiku - full of depth and contemplation. It extends the moment of death and spreading ashes to beyond loss but to that of freedom with the elements. Great work.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Yes, this is a good haiku - full of depth and contemplation. It extends the moment of death and spreading ashes to beyond loss but to that of freedom with the elements. Great work.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an intriguing modern haiku. I thought the metaphor 'a sea of life' is very good, since the theme is death. It sounds like a specific place means a lot to you, although it did not specify which body of water. Nice read.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This is an intriguing modern haiku. I thought the metaphor 'a sea of life' is very good, since the theme is death. It sounds like a specific place means a lot to you, although it did not specify which body of water. Nice read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jacquelyn popp
This is a beautifully written haiku. Beautiful photo that went well with your poem. The words flowed smoothly. I loved reading your poem. Good job. Very nicely done as always with your posts. I loved your line my ashes will ride the wind. It presents a sense of freedom if that makes any sense. I'm not sure how to explain it. Thank you for sharing your poem, and looking forward to reading more of your writing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This is a beautifully written haiku. Beautiful photo that went well with your poem. The words flowed smoothly. I loved reading your poem. Good job. Very nicely done as always with your posts. I loved your line my ashes will ride the wind. It presents a sense of freedom if that makes any sense. I'm not sure how to explain it. Thank you for sharing your poem, and looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Yes, are right, when we die the spirit goes on, in the people we love and nature.... your review shows that you know what haiku is about.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Oh Gypsy, I know this is just a poem, but the thought of you dying is too much to think about. This poem is well done and has good sensory appeal. Of special note:
my ashes will ride the wind --
(good imagery)
Well chosen photo. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Oh Gypsy, I know this is just a poem, but the thought of you dying is too much to think about. This poem is well done and has good sensory appeal. Of special note:
my ashes will ride the wind --
(good imagery)
Well chosen photo. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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It's just a poem, I don't plan to die until I'm 100 years old. LoL
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Debi wrote one about death, and now you. It was all too much to think about--I do realize it's just a poem, but it's just a poem written by you.
Xo. M
Comment from lyenochka
I remember how you said that you wanted to be cremated and have your ashes strewn on the Mediterranean Sea, or maybe the Pacific? I like the "sea of life" because the sea is full of life and it also makes me think of the vastness of life itself as we look on anyone's life. Great job!
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I remember how you said that you wanted to be cremated and have your ashes strewn on the Mediterranean Sea, or maybe the Pacific? I like the "sea of life" because the sea is full of life and it also makes me think of the vastness of life itself as we look on anyone's life. Great job!
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Yes, it will be the pacific ocean where my children live. God is love and everything is God, be one with everything.
Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day, big sister. Love you.
Marival
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It seems hard to believe that our life ends as if we have never been here and we join all those souls who have been before, but here your ashes ride the wind for the final time, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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It seems hard to believe that our life ends as if we have never been here and we join all those souls who have been before, but here your ashes ride the wind for the final time, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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