Doubt
Unanswered Prayers Cause...6 total reviews
Comment from Val Crisson
Great presentation, and a very thought provoking little poem. When prayers are not answered, it might be for a reason. This poem shows how fragile human belief can be. Good luck with this one.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Great presentation, and a very thought provoking little poem. When prayers are not answered, it might be for a reason. This poem shows how fragile human belief can be. Good luck with this one.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this great review. I've had some moments of doubt in my life, so it's about me I guess.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I'm not sure if you mean faith is fragile.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I'm not sure if you mean faith is fragile.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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It's definitely what I mean. Thank you for understanding and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true and even when it is crushed, it never really dies and people often return to their faith after once abandoning it. That is the thing with hope and faith, it can never be really crushed, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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So true and even when it is crushed, it never really dies and people often return to their faith after once abandoning it. That is the thing with hope and faith, it can never be really crushed, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate you taking the time. :)
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! I disagree slightly as i think that faith is so strong, it isnt easily broken. I think it is about trust.
Anyhoo, Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! I disagree slightly as i think that faith is so strong, it isnt easily broken. I think it is about trust.
Anyhoo, Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the 3-5-3 contest. The text is an okay size. It could be one size larger. With scrolly fonts it is always a good idea to use a larger size. The message is clearly stated. The statement can relate to a religious relationship with God or an earthly context with one's love. At first glance the hands appear bloody, so that adds to whatever mood you want to present. It's a striking photo. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry to the 3-5-3 contest. The text is an okay size. It could be one size larger. With scrolly fonts it is always a good idea to use a larger size. The message is clearly stated. The statement can relate to a religious relationship with God or an earthly context with one's love. At first glance the hands appear bloody, so that adds to whatever mood you want to present. It's a striking photo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, much appreciated. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from JT traveller
I had to read this poem a few times to assess what it was trying to tell me. That is always a good thing. I feel you are trying to say that currently, your faith is being tested.
A thought provoking read. Great layout and choice of accompanying illustration.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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I had to read this poem a few times to assess what it was trying to tell me. That is always a good thing. I feel you are trying to say that currently, your faith is being tested.
A thought provoking read. Great layout and choice of accompanying illustration.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this insightful review.
