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A story of an ongoing mistake
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Comment from
jmdg1954
How the heck did the attendant tranquilize himself? Was it in the sandwich?
This is a qualifying entry to the contest with the needed flash components. Best of luck.
John
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
Thank you for your kind review. Yes, it was in the sandwich. Have a great one.
Comment from
jessizero
I got a kick out of this one. It made me laugh, even though I feel a little guilty about laughing at the feeder's misadventures. You did a great job with the twist at the end. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review. Have a great one.
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