Comment from Eleri

Excellent

I like the concept behind this poem, which is generally well written given the unusual form of a Trinet. The rhyming is good but I think that using 'larger-than-life' as one word is cheating a bit.
Other than that this is a good poem so good luck with it
Eleri

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023

Eleri,

Thank you for your review. I checked my syllable counter and Larger-Than-Life is considered one word.

How many syllables are in larger-than-life: 4
Total number Words: 1

All the best,

Eugene

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a great entry in this trinet contest. The theme is really good, and the form is an intriguing one. This is beautifully written, and a very competing post, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hello Author,
I liked this Trinet all about the seashores in the Springtime. I wish I was there right now! I woke up to below zero temperatures this morning. I could definitely deal with 'summer's readmission'!
Good luck with the contest!
Susan :)

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I feel familiar with these scenes as spring and summer will soon repeat and we will enjoy the warmer days by the seaside, a fine write for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023