Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This tanka was not only fun to read, but fun to visualize. It would be so much fun dancing until dusk and the shadows frolicking at our feet. Thank you for sharing this fun image with us.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Barbara,

Excellent review and kind words. I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. Have a wonderful evening.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Exceptional

I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- good use of metaphors long shadows on the dusty road while they danced - paints a cool picture- frolicking feet and thunderous laughter- gives a Fun and positive vibe- very nice AP

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, AP, I really appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a lovely night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your use of alliteration here (dusk and dancing) and "frolicking feet." I especially liked the "eternity road" that contrasts the notion of time in dusk because the joy seems to last forever.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023

Why can't everyone get my poems the way you do? Many do but not as deeply as you do. Love ya, big sis.

Marival ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 28-Feb-2023

💖💖😊Like minds, right, Little Sis?

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023

Yes (*÷*)

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Yes ❤️ we do 😊

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A good writing in your style of writing. I enjoyed it you did a good job of presenting it beautifully. May you have a good evening and may God bless you and all you do.
Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023

Patricia,

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely evening.

Gypsy hugs