Rhyme Time?
Break time or...5 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is truly the hardest firm to write. Some poets would probably differ. I think you did a splendid job with this one, mystery poet. My very best for the contest and for the day.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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This is truly the hardest firm to write. Some poets would probably differ. I think you did a splendid job with this one, mystery poet. My very best for the contest and for the day.
Sal :))
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from patricia dillon
You certainly have a facility for rhyming. I cannot say the same for myself, but I know what it is like when the mind starts to wander. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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You certainly have a facility for rhyming. I cannot say the same for myself, but I know what it is like when the mind starts to wander. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a fun mono-rhyme poem about our call to write rhyme. It starts with you saying you are tired of rhyming and don't want to do it. And then moves to you realizing rhyming or poetry is your calling and then maybe pushing yourself to publish. Maybe it is reminding all of us the publishing is an option.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hi
This is a fun mono-rhyme poem about our call to write rhyme. It starts with you saying you are tired of rhyming and don't want to do it. And then moves to you realizing rhyming or poetry is your calling and then maybe pushing yourself to publish. Maybe it is reminding all of us the publishing is an option.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I really appreciate it. :)
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No problem, Sharon.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
After not wanting to rhyme here, you rhymed all the way with matching end rhymes for the contest. The metre is a bit wonky, but your rhymes are spot, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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After not wanting to rhyme here, you rhymed all the way with matching end rhymes for the contest. The metre is a bit wonky, but your rhymes are spot, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from patcelaw
There are some times that I just absolutely do not want to use rhyming verse at all. There are times when Raymond Burr seems to come to my mind very rarely. I wish you luck in this contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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There are some times that I just absolutely do not want to use rhyming verse at all. There are times when Raymond Burr seems to come to my mind very rarely. I wish you luck in this contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this terrific review. :)
