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Dear God

My note to the Big Guy

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Well said, Bro. You're testimony if true should top the scale of a hundred. No doubt the faceless committee may pick some other underserving writer, but here is to you. My blessings to you. Spend it wisely.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much Ben. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This is a good entry for the - Dear God contest. The letter is engaging and uplifting. It shows the influence God has had on your life and the trials and tribulations you have experienced. A rough road but you have come through it walking head on into the wind and races. I like how you referred to your father - I doubt he's readily available in your location. It says a lot without stating it all. A good life story. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from patcelaw
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Earl, this is a very heartfelt letter to God. I appreciate all the things that you had to say about how he has cared for you through the many years and trials you have faced. I too have been through many trials, and he has always taken care of me.
Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much Patricia. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine write and you include a little of your personal history here Earl and your son has followed in your footsteps as he is also in the army now but I don't think American have sent troops there so far? Your words are faithful and loyal and I enjoyed your grateful words about your life, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from BethShelby
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I enjoyed reading your prayer and I love the way you talk to God like you have a very easy going conversational relationship. Saying you're and long-time fan and you haven't written before but talk often is a neat way of putting it. This Dear God letter seems like a nicely-expressed prayer for the contest and should do well.

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.