Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, BB50----equating life to dancing. Since I could never dance, certainly not now, no wonder my life blows! I had and continue to have three left feet

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Nice attempt at an ABC poem. I had not tried, but perhaps I will given time and if a subject matter smacks me where I ideate. Keep on truckin' my Bermudian/Charlotte friend.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

You sustain the imagery very well. It sets a calm and romantic mood while adhering to the challenge of this particular form. There is a lilt and musicality suited to the subject.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Very poetic! The sun and moon can dance throughout our horizon adorning us with their love. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
miek

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2023