Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the Autumnal scene to our eyes here and I enjoyed the journey through those fine colourful changes when a new season takes hold, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate your review on my haiku stack - although it wasn't all about autumn ;-) ~DDxo

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Exceptional

This stack of haikus is well done! Each Sartori is excellently dealt and it told the story of fall and the romantic ways of falling leaves and forgiven days when spring comes and summer is not far behind.
Thanks for going full tilt and taking on the no-rules contest!
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Jesse. I am honored to receive your most supportive review and six stars on my haiku stack. My day is now made. Thank you also for the smile you have given me :-) ~DDxo

reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Mar-2023

I am glad I made your day and put a smile on your face. Your stack of haikus deserved the six stars.
Have a great week!
Jesse

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

What a truly gorgeous poem is it remarkable and fabulous job! It is very clear this is written by An expert hand filled with talent Coupled with a large vocabulary and imagination has pulled out this gorgeous poem.
I have no issues with punctuation spelling sentence structure grammar subject matter none of those things are an issue as everything is spot on. This absolutely peace filled poem. And with complete with this lovely picture. A stunning submission worthy of attention and I wish you the best of luck have a great day!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Lea. I appreciate your supportive and uplifting review on my haiku stack. Your comments are very thoughtful. ~DD

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Autumn and Spring are my favourite seasons, yet the winter and summer are needed, one to keep our plants and trees safe for the winter, to let them rest ready to start again in the spring. And the summer is needed to allow those trees and flowers to show off their new clothes. Your poem is a delight of words, as autumn takes over. Well done, a really lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Sandra. As always, your supportive comments are much appreciated. ~DDxo

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

A colorful affair indeed. This is such lovely imagery. I am inspired to do my spring planting. If daydreaming and mind drift for the reader was a goal, you are there.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Nicki. Your kind review on my stack haiku is much appreciated. Enjoy your spring planting:-) ~DD

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

These are sweet little things, but I think the third needs a little attention.

In this line, 'as breeze pulls on hue blanket,' you are using the word 'hue' as an adjective. According to the Encyclopaedia Britannica this word is a noun. Also, I believe the word lays is incorrect here and should be 'liesi.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thanks, Jim. I appreciate your keen eye. I shall have a play with the third. ~DD

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

A beautiful Autumnal poem. My favourite time of year. Your words have captured it's essence brilliantly. The personification lends your words a truly dreamy feel. Great writing. J

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thanks J, your comments and review are much appreciated. ~DD