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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Excellent
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This is such a wonderful, romantic poem. The poetic words and its presentation are graciously written. I have no sixes left so I'll have to send you a virtual six rating.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
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This is a sweet poem of connecting with the beloved one through flights of imagination and memories that bring the couple together again and dancing in the skies.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I'm glad you find my poem sweet. Happy weekend!

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 11-Mar-2023
    Happy weekend to you, too!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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Love is a wonderful emotion and your words describe this beautifully, it's as if I am reading about feelings that lovers have 24/7, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Excellent poem about
    The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.

    the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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From setting suns to moonlit nights, romance dances the night away and hearts enjoy the connection, a colourful presentation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Dolly,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 10-Mar-2023
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reply by Dolly'sPoems on 10-Mar-2023
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Excellent
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I liked your poem very much. It has a happy vibe to it. The picture suits it well, also. I like the way you combine romance and imagination with an excellent choice of words.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Verna,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem is not only beautiful, but it also dances and sings.
Your choice of words rejoices the heart as well as painting pictures of love.
Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Rebecca,

    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review. I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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I love the illustration of your poem, as it stirs the imagination to create the imagery and the elegance of descriptive phrasing, this is beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Roy,

    Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 10-Mar-2023
    You too Gypsy