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It surely can't stay dark forever8 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I really enjoyed your inspiring and optimistic outlook on life's challenging moments. The sun will rise again after the darkest night. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
I really enjoyed your inspiring and optimistic outlook on life's challenging moments. The sun will rise again after the darkest night. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review, which is greatly appreciated.
Comment from royowen
It's true that nothing lasts forever, but does have an end, even sorrow and happiness both are intermittent, the best scripture, "tears may remain for a night but joy comes in the morning" Psalm 30:5, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
It's true that nothing lasts forever, but does have an end, even sorrow and happiness both are intermittent, the best scripture, "tears may remain for a night but joy comes in the morning" Psalm 30:5, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy, for your kind and thoughtful review. Very best wishes from Michael.
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully worded poem, and your presentation is excellent. I wish you the very best in everything that you do and that you will keep writing your works of art. Patricia.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
This is a beautifully worded poem, and your presentation is excellent. I wish you the very best in everything that you do and that you will keep writing your works of art. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Lovely to hear from you again, Patricia. My warmest wishes to you.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, the loss of a loved one can cause this lonely feeling as the grief takes a hold, hopefully the sun will shine again, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
Excellent, the loss of a loved one can cause this lonely feeling as the grief takes a hold, hopefully the sun will shine again, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review, which is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is an uplifting poem. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I have been wrapped in the blues for a few month so this was a good poem to read. I feel it has an uplifting, positive message but the background of the poem doesn't reflect this mood. Consider placing the poem on a richer yellow background. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
This is an uplifting poem. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I have been wrapped in the blues for a few month so this was a good poem to read. I feel it has an uplifting, positive message but the background of the poem doesn't reflect this mood. Consider placing the poem on a richer yellow background. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review, for which I am very grateful. Thank you also, for sharing your thoughts. Very best wishes from Michael.
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love good old-fashioned rhyming poetry. So much of the poetry today is free-form and hard to follow, let alone, understand. I found your poem toe be delightful and refreshing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
I love good old-fashioned rhyming poetry. So much of the poetry today is free-form and hard to follow, let alone, understand. I found your poem toe be delightful and refreshing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review. I'm afraid my writing will never be on trend, but I'm pleased that you appreciate it.
Comment from JT traveller
An uplifting read. I agree, nothing lasts forever, not the good times nor the bad. In my heart, as it seems it does in yours, hope Springs eternal. This message comes across strongly in your poem.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
An uplifting read. I agree, nothing lasts forever, not the good times nor the bad. In my heart, as it seems it does in yours, hope Springs eternal. This message comes across strongly in your poem.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Jacqueline
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review, Jacqueline. I'm so pleased that you liked this poem. Very best wishes from Michael.
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My pleasure Michael. Have a lovely evening. Jacqueline
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the sentiment here of grief eventually subsiding and the darkness showing some glimpses of light. Perfect metre and rhymes and well chosen words here Michael, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
I adore the sentiment here of grief eventually subsiding and the darkness showing some glimpses of light. Perfect metre and rhymes and well chosen words here Michael, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for your most kind and thoughtful review. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Warmest of wishes from Michael x