Gods Little Angel
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Comment from Terry Broxson
This is such a sad story. But the task at hand is to comment on the writing. The way you describe the circumstances is believable, and the emotion expressed by the doctor is well done. I think other writers would overlook that point.
Your acceptance of what happened and how you all handled it later in your life is admirable, and the written description brings your reader into your lives in a very touching way. Excellent writing. Terry.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is such a sad story. But the task at hand is to comment on the writing. The way you describe the circumstances is believable, and the emotion expressed by the doctor is well done. I think other writers would overlook that point.
Your acceptance of what happened and how you all handled it later in your life is admirable, and the written description brings your reader into your lives in a very touching way. Excellent writing. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Wow. Thank you, Terry. Your review means a lot to me!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well written. Sad story, but a nice one.
I looked it up and was curious about Meconium Aspiriation Syndrome with a C-section. Seems like that wouldn't happen.
I'm sorry for your loss. It must have been devastating.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Very well written. Sad story, but a nice one.
I looked it up and was curious about Meconium Aspiriation Syndrome with a C-section. Seems like that wouldn't happen.
I'm sorry for your loss. It must have been devastating.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reading. Though I don?t follow why you would write - Seems like that wouldn't happen.
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It seems to me that a C-section would take place before the baby began a natural birthing process and she would not be trying to breathe. And that the Doctor would have her out before she did try to breathe. But I'm not a doctor and certainly no expert.
Comment from Destiny Awaits Darling
I have tears streaming down my face, as I am writing this review.ð??" 'I'm so sorry for your loss' sounds so hollow, in the face of such profound grief and sorrow-- but {i}truly{/i}, I am so so sorry for the loss of your sweet baby girl.
As a fellow Christian, I know that you know that your darling Kristen has not been TRULY 'lost,' but rather, y'all are just in a 'long-distance relationship.' :) One day, you will be reunited-- as if you were never apart in the first place. ð???
Your daughter is so blessed to have had you, and your wife's love as her swaddling-blanket, throughout her short time on this Earth. ð?«? I hope you know that, as surely as you know she has been watching over your family-- she has {b}also{/b} never stopped feeling your constant love for her, too.
In fact, the moment the angels took her up to Heaven, and the worldly distractions around her fell away, I truly believe that she could feel your love even STRONGER than before.
Just as you have continued to feel her presence throughout all these years, she has not gone a moment without feeling yours, too. The bond that y'all share with your beautiful angel is a golden chord-- pure and so strong--and it has penetrated the veil between Heaven and Earth-- linking your souls, forever.
I feel so blessed to have come across this beautiful writing of yours. Thank you for being so vulnerable, and for sharing with us the story of your baby girl. Her story-- her life-- matters. It matters to me-- and to every other person who reads this writing, as well. Thank you for sharing her with us. God is so proud of you and your wife, and your family. Your faithfulness in His goodness, even in the face of such tragedy, is inspiring, and powerful. ð?«¶ð??»
I feel like I cannot end this review without telling you of the beautiful 'coincidence' (I don't believe in coincidences) that is that my little sister's name is also Kristen-- and she is a March baby, as well. A year ago, she got married to her 'high school sweetheart' (actually, they met at church, but they were both in high school at the time, so that's why I used that phrase). They have a big, 115 lb. blonde lab, named Duke. They are happy, and on-fire for Jesus. I am the proudest big sister in the world.
I share those facts about 'my Kristen' because I thought that maybe it would bring y'all some peace, and joy to imagine 'your Kristen' walking alongside mine-- and living through her, too.
I pray that on the days you miss your Kristen the most, that God envelopes your family in the warm, comforting hug that is His presence-- and that you will know that with His presence, also came your daughter's. She is proud of you-- all of you. Thank you for sharing her with us. Now, she will live in my heart, too. <3 God bless you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I have tears streaming down my face, as I am writing this review.ð??" 'I'm so sorry for your loss' sounds so hollow, in the face of such profound grief and sorrow-- but {i}truly{/i}, I am so so sorry for the loss of your sweet baby girl.
As a fellow Christian, I know that you know that your darling Kristen has not been TRULY 'lost,' but rather, y'all are just in a 'long-distance relationship.' :) One day, you will be reunited-- as if you were never apart in the first place. ð???
Your daughter is so blessed to have had you, and your wife's love as her swaddling-blanket, throughout her short time on this Earth. ð?«? I hope you know that, as surely as you know she has been watching over your family-- she has {b}also{/b} never stopped feeling your constant love for her, too.
In fact, the moment the angels took her up to Heaven, and the worldly distractions around her fell away, I truly believe that she could feel your love even STRONGER than before.
Just as you have continued to feel her presence throughout all these years, she has not gone a moment without feeling yours, too. The bond that y'all share with your beautiful angel is a golden chord-- pure and so strong--and it has penetrated the veil between Heaven and Earth-- linking your souls, forever.
I feel so blessed to have come across this beautiful writing of yours. Thank you for being so vulnerable, and for sharing with us the story of your baby girl. Her story-- her life-- matters. It matters to me-- and to every other person who reads this writing, as well. Thank you for sharing her with us. God is so proud of you and your wife, and your family. Your faithfulness in His goodness, even in the face of such tragedy, is inspiring, and powerful. ð?«¶ð??»
I feel like I cannot end this review without telling you of the beautiful 'coincidence' (I don't believe in coincidences) that is that my little sister's name is also Kristen-- and she is a March baby, as well. A year ago, she got married to her 'high school sweetheart' (actually, they met at church, but they were both in high school at the time, so that's why I used that phrase). They have a big, 115 lb. blonde lab, named Duke. They are happy, and on-fire for Jesus. I am the proudest big sister in the world.
I share those facts about 'my Kristen' because I thought that maybe it would bring y'all some peace, and joy to imagine 'your Kristen' walking alongside mine-- and living through her, too.
I pray that on the days you miss your Kristen the most, that God envelopes your family in the warm, comforting hug that is His presence-- and that you will know that with His presence, also came your daughter's. She is proud of you-- all of you. Thank you for sharing her with us. Now, she will live in my heart, too. <3 God bless you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Destiny, first I would like to know your name. I read your review in the middle of the night, and I?m just not sure how to respond, other than, I?d be honored to be your friend. Granted I?m old enough to be your father, but friendships knows no age.
Your words are the nicest, warmest, and honest ones anyone could ask for. Your "coincidence" relating our two Kristen?s warmed my soul. I?m positive there is a bond secured somehow between this two. Your Kristen having you as her big sister, can only make her a better, caring individual.
Thank you so much for your review. I?ve already read it four times and plan to cut-n-paste it to print a copy.
Tomorrow is Kristen?s birthday and I will be sure to read it to her when I pray with her tomorrow.
Thank you so much for sharing your soul with me.
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It makes my heart so happy to hear how you have been so moved by my review! :?) Truly, I am honored that God made it so that our paths would cross, and I could read your Kristen?s story, and become your friend! As you said? friendship knows no age, and true compassion knows no bounds. I consider myself blessed to have the means to write you my sincere sentiments? as without God?s gift of the Holy Spirit, He never would?ve been able to speak to you through my words as powerfully as you say they have. <3
My name is Brittany? I know I signed it in my response to one of your messages, but I figured I would say it again, anyways! Your kind words about my influence on my sister brought tears to my eyes, and really moved me? thank you so much for saying that! You have no way of knowing how much I needed to hear that, or why, but God spoke to me through you, anyways? and for that, I am touched beyond belief! :?) Thank you for displaying the heart of Jesus so well, and for allowing yourself to be His vessel. 💜
I?m sure that I will remember to message you tomorrow, but I will also say Happy Birthday to your Kristen, now! To hear that you will be reading her my comments during your prayer with her tomorrow has put a huge smile on my face, and I am just so glad that I was able to get my sincere feelings and sentiments across in a way that properly conveyed their gravity. As much as my comments have struck a chord within you, your Kristen, and your great, endless love for her, has impacted me just as severely. 🫶🏻
Thank you so so much for your heartfelt response back to me? I really cannot express enough how much this new connection between you, your Kristen, my Kristen, and I truly means to me! I know that I will be thanking God for this moment shared between us all, for the rest of my life. 🫂🫶🏻 God bless you, and your family!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am so sorry for your loss and the grief you have suffered in losing a child. I cannot imagine the immense pain you went through. Your child has not been forgotten, a very sad story and thank you for sharing this with us, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I am so sorry for your loss and the grief you have suffered in losing a child. I cannot imagine the immense pain you went through. Your child has not been forgotten, a very sad story and thank you for sharing this with us, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing.
Always appreciated!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely story about one of the saddest things that can happen, an accident at a perfect child's birth. You were so blessed to have three more children. None of them was her, but they were just as dear.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a lovely story about one of the saddest things that can happen, an accident at a perfect child's birth. You were so blessed to have three more children. None of them was her, but they were just as dear.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for a great review.
Comment from MissMerri
Oh my goodness. Such a heartbreaking story but you told it so well. The emotional impact was powerful because of your writing and I couldn't help but she'd a tear or two. Kristen obviously played a very important role in your family even though she stayed such a short time. Thank you for sharing this. It was very meaningful.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness. Such a heartbreaking story but you told it so well. The emotional impact was powerful because of your writing and I couldn't help but she'd a tear or two. Kristen obviously played a very important role in your family even though she stayed such a short time. Thank you for sharing this. It was very meaningful.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Miss Meri, I cannot that you more for such a great review of our little girl. She earned those stars you gave me!
Comment from JT traveller
A deeply moving story. Despite the tragedy of this event it did not make you lose faith in God. A well composed piece of writing.
Just a small typo, easily corrected,
"He told us hi w she fought to her last breath."
Thank you for sharing your story with us readers. This could not have been easy to write.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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A deeply moving story. Despite the tragedy of this event it did not make you lose faith in God. A well composed piece of writing.
Just a small typo, easily corrected,
"He told us hi w she fought to her last breath."
Thank you for sharing your story with us readers. This could not have been easy to write.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Corrected. Thank you so much. Always appreciated.
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I apologise if it felt too abrupt. Your story was so moving, so engaging that I thought about not mentioning it. I hope you have a wonderful day. Jacqueline
