Hamlet's Goodwill
Hamlet helps out the homeless3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a kindhearted entry into the 80-word flash contest. The text is an okay size but would be better one size larger. The story is well-told and, the plot doesn't seem rushed. This sentence has a misspelling} He praises for them hoping they get well. I think you meant the word "prays". The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This is a kindhearted entry into the 80-word flash contest. The text is an okay size but would be better one size larger. The story is well-told and, the plot doesn't seem rushed. This sentence has a misspelling} He praises for them hoping they get well. I think you meant the word "prays". The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Okay, I did what you asked. Thank you for your suggestions! Is it better now for a five stars rating? Can you please take another look?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This person should sleep well at night knowing he is doing all he can for his fellow men, a fine upstanding guy is the hero of your story here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This person should sleep well at night knowing he is doing all he can for his fellow men, a fine upstanding guy is the hero of your story here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a wonderful 80 word Contest entry. I find myself wondering if there are still people named Hamlet. Never met one, so it threw me off a little bit.
Nice work here. Thank you for the good read.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a wonderful 80 word Contest entry. I find myself wondering if there are still people named Hamlet. Never met one, so it threw me off a little bit.
Nice work here. Thank you for the good read.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks!