Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a sweet entry into the 80-word flash contest. The text is a great size. The story is well-told and, the plot doesn't seem rushed. That's a feat in 80 words. Your Jeffery sound like a good kid who loves to make others feel good. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023

Thank you, my friend! I hope all is well?

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 14-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a wonderful and uplifting read, I believe everyone has a purpose and can very much be of importance in their own way, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023

Everyone certainly does.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We still have a lot to learn about down's syndrome and how the brain functions and the remarkable work hospitals do helps these children to develop and able to function in society, although they remain vulnerable, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023

Thank you, Dolly. In my experience, even with all our brain capacity, humans break down into two basic categories. Givers and takers. They are givers.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-Mar-2023

I so agree with you x x x