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A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
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Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I was never any good at this and it could be a man thing. I try my best at bowling but the ball never seems to go straight. I enjoyed enthusiasm here though Eugene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
Comment from
Katherine M. (k-11)
Oh yes, I remember those wonderful days - your short poem brings them springing back into focus. I also was a great afficionado of the game, and spent all afternoon down at the lake. Great poem, with a nice touch of alliteration. kay
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
Comment from
Tom Horonzy
When did we stop doing that? And do children do it today? Back in the day, I could do that for hours, if I could find sufficient flatties. WEll done, bard.
Have adreamy, thought provoking day.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have used your six words well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You capture the spirit of having done this
as a child very well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
Comment from
Julie Lau
Thank you for bringing back this childhood memory. I remember searching hard for the right stone, because that was half the key to success. It had to be - yes - an aerodynamic disc. Then ten, even up to 13 bounces were possible with a wide enough stretch of flat water. Good luck in the contest,
Julie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
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