Twin Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "part 10"A one night stand leads to many surprises
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Comment from Nicki Nance
This pulled me in from the start. The scene is well written and easy to follow despite the complicated events and the similarity of the character's names. I would read on for sure.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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This pulled me in from the start. The scene is well written and easy to follow despite the complicated events and the similarity of the character's names. I would read on for sure.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, Are you sure you want Timothy as a guy. He... doesn't really act like most men. He is very...emotional.
notes:
"Timothy, please, if he {walks} up, don't say anything about being his father."
- should this be: wakes
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Hmm, Are you sure you want Timothy as a guy. He... doesn't really act like most men. He is very...emotional.
notes:
"Timothy, please, if he {walks} up, don't say anything about being his father."
- should this be: wakes
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I made him emotional for a reason most men don't show emotions. I wanted to make it different
