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Comment from Mark Schardine
It seems that both persons acted unwisely and cannot heal scars they have inflicted on each other and themselves. Even thinking about it only makes things worse.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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It seems that both persons acted unwisely and cannot heal scars they have inflicted on each other and themselves. Even thinking about it only makes things worse.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- nice picture presentation of two lost souls - one / dying heart locked in the past - perhaps realizing old childish habits responsible- would suggest -... pent up pain- giving 7 syllables - smoother ? Good Job AP
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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I like your tanka poem- nice picture presentation of two lost souls - one / dying heart locked in the past - perhaps realizing old childish habits responsible- would suggest -... pent up pain- giving 7 syllables - smoother ? Good Job AP
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. I made the change. Thanks!.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
What a horrible idea have a near death heart. I was unfamiliar with that word moribund. Thank you for educating me. Once again, I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. I could feel the emotion as I read.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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What a horrible idea have a near death heart. I was unfamiliar with that word moribund. Thank you for educating me. Once again, I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. I could feel the emotion as I read.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from kahpot
Yes, memories of our past can affect our future years, and letting go can be difficult, a wonderful Tanka, thank you for explaining moribund, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Yes, memories of our past can affect our future years, and letting go can be difficult, a wonderful Tanka, thank you for explaining moribund, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a lovely evening (or day)
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Comment from lyenochka
I do think childhood pain can affect all our relationships. I liked how you say "tethered to old ways" because we don't know why we tend to make the choices we do except sometimes it's tied to childhood pain.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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I do think childhood pain can affect all our relationships. I liked how you say "tethered to old ways" because we don't know why we tend to make the choices we do except sometimes it's tied to childhood pain.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Yes, I know you understand this at a deep level. Thank you very much for the exceptional review.
Love you,
Marival
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures brought so much to your words. They also brought the doubt, the fear and the anger that you must be feeling. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures brought so much to your words. They also brought the doubt, the fear and the anger that you must be feeling. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a lovely evening (or day) blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
