Grasping Faith
5-7-5 Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 faith writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 faith writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Nice quote. Thank you :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like, "turn to God; say a prayer." If we find the right path, we are stirred in the right direction. If we turn to God and pray, we will feel fulfillment in our heart for Him always.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Like, "turn to God; say a prayer." If we find the right path, we are stirred in the right direction. If we turn to God and pray, we will feel fulfillment in our heart for Him always.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
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so welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This a good entry into 5-7-5 Faith contest. The text is an okay size but would be more prominent larger. It is under a large visual. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. The visual is just okay. I don't see how it fits. The kiss emoji is cute, but your message is serious. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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This a good entry into 5-7-5 Faith contest. The text is an okay size but would be more prominent larger. It is under a large visual. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. The visual is just okay. I don't see how it fits. The kiss emoji is cute, but your message is serious. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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God created the heavens and earth. The sky with sun is symbolism for being in God's glory. At least that's what I know. I didn't think to look for a mosque/church/temple.
Thank you :)
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You know the saying; hindsight is always 20/20. You are welcome.
Comment from JT traveller
I like this 5-7-5 poem. I personally am not sure whether it is 16 or 17 syllables. I suppose it depends on how you pronounce prayer?
A sound message with a lot very illustration and a cute emoticon at the end. Thanks for making the day brighter. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I like this 5-7-5 poem. I personally am not sure whether it is 16 or 17 syllables. I suppose it depends on how you pronounce prayer?
A sound message with a lot very illustration and a cute emoticon at the end. Thanks for making the day brighter. Jacqueline
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from kahpot
How very well said, everybody needs faith, and be able to understand the meaning of faith and prayer, an excellent 5-7-5, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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How very well said, everybody needs faith, and be able to understand the meaning of faith and prayer, an excellent 5-7-5, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from Nicki Nance
Nice 575 entry. The flow of it is light and lovely. The message is given in a positive tone. The colors in the graphic and the emoji continue that theme.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Nice 575 entry. The flow of it is light and lovely. The message is given in a positive tone. The colors in the graphic and the emoji continue that theme.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Its a nice sweet and short little poem with a message and hope at the same time.
I think you're a Palm along with determination and action. Take the world by the horns and live a wonderful blessed life.
I find no issues with your subject matter or your word choices flows very nicely and thanks a punch in such a small short space.
Appreciate your submission and look forward to the next one thank you have a great night!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Its a nice sweet and short little poem with a message and hope at the same time.
I think you're a Palm along with determination and action. Take the world by the horns and live a wonderful blessed life.
I find no issues with your subject matter or your word choices flows very nicely and thanks a punch in such a small short space.
Appreciate your submission and look forward to the next one thank you have a great night!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. I like how you think about your faith in this poem. Excellent work! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. I like how you think about your faith in this poem. Excellent work! Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you :)
