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One touch can be...
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Comment from
RodG
This poem has sensual overtones that definitely suggest passion. But rhyming all three lines weakens your poem. The phrase "fingertips and SUCH" does not work at all.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from
kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, love the added touch of rhyme-very clever, your words certainly bring back memories, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
Thank you so much for this delightful review.
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