Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Spring's Arrival"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
You need a dash...
under fuchsia skies
tulips spiritedly dream -
beauty rekindled
Hello, thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. The satori is a good twist.
Good job,
Gypsy
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You need a dash...
under fuchsia skies
tulips spiritedly dream -
beauty rekindled
Hello, thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. The satori is a good twist.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
If androids dream of electric sheep, what do tulips dream of? This was a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Nice and simple, like the flowers themselves.
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If androids dream of electric sheep, what do tulips dream of? This was a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Nice and simple, like the flowers themselves.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
This is absolutely lovely. Your words take me inside that picture- under the fuchsia spring sky! The last line "beauty rekindled" is perfect- Two words that say a page-full! Exactly what a haiku should be! Thank you for sharing.
<3
Jessica
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This is absolutely lovely. Your words take me inside that picture- under the fuchsia spring sky! The last line "beauty rekindled" is perfect- Two words that say a page-full! Exactly what a haiku should be! Thank you for sharing.
<3
Jessica
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
