Winter Sunrise
Winter in a frozen forest is a symphony.3 total reviews
Comment from Julie Lau
You use well-chosen words to describe the delicate icy wonder of the frozen forest. Do you stand out in the ice and snow, I wonder, to observe these phenomena at close quarters, then realise after a time that your toes and nose have dropped off? Anyway best of luck to the remainder of you in the coming competition.
Julie Lau
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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You use well-chosen words to describe the delicate icy wonder of the frozen forest. Do you stand out in the ice and snow, I wonder, to observe these phenomena at close quarters, then realise after a time that your toes and nose have dropped off? Anyway best of luck to the remainder of you in the coming competition.
Julie Lau
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Not drop off, but nose gets red and toes do go cold. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so lovely. Your first line drew me in. I loved going deep into your frozen forest. I liked the candied branches and your tinkling icy raindrops.
Your piece is chock full of creative images. The overall effect is delightful. Your dark forest turns to a sparkling wind chime.
I enjoyed every word.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is so lovely. Your first line drew me in. I loved going deep into your frozen forest. I liked the candied branches and your tinkling icy raindrops.
Your piece is chock full of creative images. The overall effect is delightful. Your dark forest turns to a sparkling wind chime.
I enjoyed every word.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and your encouraging words and of course the six star honor. Appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine words to describe this icy, freezing scene and this is so pretty to look at but the chill and breeze make this a place I would want to avoid. A romantic write Harry, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Fine words to describe this icy, freezing scene and this is so pretty to look at but the chill and breeze make this a place I would want to avoid. A romantic write Harry, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for your read and response. Appreciated and love back. x
