Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 122 "Aquamarine Sky"Romantic Tanka Poems
13 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love your poem, the flow, the imagery and rich colours combine to form a sumptuous meal for the eyes and soul. Well written, dear Gypsy. It made a great read. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Lol.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I love your poem, the flow, the imagery and rich colours combine to form a sumptuous meal for the eyes and soul. Well written, dear Gypsy. It made a great read. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Lol.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I really appreciate your time and exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A dreamy tanka adventure in words and color. Beautifully written and presented. I truly enjoyed reading and the experience.
Well done
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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A dreamy tanka adventure in words and color. Beautifully written and presented. I truly enjoyed reading and the experience.
Well done
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I really love the use of colour in your posts Gypsy, and to add to the imagery you produce through that great useage is incredible, I did well from a haiku I wrote a couple of days ago, using those images you do. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I really love the use of colour in your posts Gypsy, and to add to the imagery you produce through that great useage is incredible, I did well from a haiku I wrote a couple of days ago, using those images you do. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Oh, I will have to look for your haiku. :)
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wow! This poem floated, effortlessly, from sky, eyes, mind, sea of time, and finally to alabaster hands. Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Wow! This poem floated, effortlessly, from sky, eyes, mind, sea of time, and finally to alabaster hands. Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Such "delicious" verse you used in your tanka, filled with imagery. The poem has an ethereal feel about it. Your picture choice is excellent It makes a good love poem.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Such "delicious" verse you used in your tanka, filled with imagery. The poem has an ethereal feel about it. Your picture choice is excellent It makes a good love poem.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- very colorful picture presentation and wording- good use of metaphors describing- eyes- sailing through seas of time- nice
Might suggest - lost my heart in stead of mind? Loosing one's mind denotes insanity - unless that was your intention- good job AP
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I like your tanka poem- very colorful picture presentation and wording- good use of metaphors describing- eyes- sailing through seas of time- nice
Might suggest - lost my heart in stead of mind? Loosing one's mind denotes insanity - unless that was your intention- good job AP
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, ap, good suggestion.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
What an interesting progression from the sky to the eyes to the mind and then the poem pivots to the " sailing through seas of time" where the narrator yearns to touch the loved one's hands.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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What an interesting progression from the sky to the eyes to the mind and then the poem pivots to the " sailing through seas of time" where the narrator yearns to touch the loved one's hands.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Someone suggested I use heart instead of mind. What do you think?
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Gypsy
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It's completely up to you. To lose one's mind is to go crazy. To lose one's heart is to show love someone and no one could else could affect the heart the same way. At least, that's what I think...
Comment from JT traveller
Creatively stunning. Beautifully composed and a joy not only to look at but to read and absorb your words as well. What another exquisite poem Gypsy. You really are so clever. Have a wonderful day. Jacqueline ð???
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Creatively stunning. Beautifully composed and a joy not only to look at but to read and absorb your words as well. What another exquisite poem Gypsy. You really are so clever. Have a wonderful day. Jacqueline ð???
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your sentences are very colorful and captivating. When you read your poem it beings a delightful wave of energy to each line; orange is emotion; aqua is balance and yellow is attention.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Your sentences are very colorful and captivating. When you read your poem it beings a delightful wave of energy to each line; orange is emotion; aqua is balance and yellow is attention.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture and a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. Your words definitely captured the essence of your thoughts. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful picture and a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. Your words definitely captured the essence of your thoughts. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy
