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Bob's Secret Crush

She had a crush on him too.

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have 2 votes.

I love the pic you chose and the topic. Both have a scar on their chin, often sharing the same kind of injury can connect people.

I had my first crush at age & for Spock, then at age 12 for my math and biology teacher.

I would clean his blackboard and after the Christmas holidays once I gave him a skull of a rabbit which I boiled and reconstructed for his collection in the classroom cabinet. He was impressed.

Many crushes followed as a teen for actors like Richard Burton,
Peter O' Toole, Burt Lancaster and a couple of Italian actors I won't bother mentioning as I'm sure you have never heard of them despite they are still famous in Europe.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    I am in a sad poems contest.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a sweet entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being a color. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. We have all had childhood crushes and you captured that moment well in your succinct story. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 26-Mar-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written humorous 50 word story you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Sorry I don't have six stars to give you! Best wishes in the contest! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    I am in a sadness poem contest.
Comment from country ranch writer
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This picture is darling I love it. Oh if only we could be young once again. Those days are gone forever I fear. Many a lasting friendships have come of young crushes for one and all. Isnt young love great?

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These two sound like a perfect match as they have matching scars and this could be the start of a beautiful friendship. I enjoyed your endearing story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
    Thanks!