Todd the Party Animal
Eat Drink and Dance20 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, some people have a lot of nerve, right, John?
I enjoyed reading your fun little story. Great job with
the word choices. I liked the action and the dialogue. So
much happened and was said in a short word count.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Haha, some people have a lot of nerve, right, John?
I enjoyed reading your fun little story. Great job with
the word choices. I liked the action and the dialogue. So
much happened and was said in a short word count.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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That?s one way to get a free night out if you can pull it off. Maybe even meet someone!
Thanks for reading.
John
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words spoken perhaps makes the difference when talking to someone you don't know. Todd must have crashed the party! Good thing he enjoyed himself before he was noticed.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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The words spoken perhaps makes the difference when talking to someone you don't know. Todd must have crashed the party! Good thing he enjoyed himself before he was noticed.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Had the time of his life. Probably has done that many times before.
Thank you for reading.
John
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous fifty-word story, Todd the Party Animal, has the proper word count and finds the moment that party-crasher Todd gets found out. See ya , Todd.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This humorous fifty-word story, Todd the Party Animal, has the proper word count and finds the moment that party-crasher Todd gets found out. See ya , Todd.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Bill for reading. Much appreciated.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, wouldn't that just be the case. A wedding crasher or a guest getting time, date and wedding wrong to attend someone elses party. A funny 50 word story for the competition. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Yes, wouldn't that just be the case. A wedding crasher or a guest getting time, date and wedding wrong to attend someone elses party. A funny 50 word story for the competition. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. What a surprise ending that Tood was a wedding crasher. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid story. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. What a surprise ending that Tood was a wedding crasher. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid story. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you Sandra.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehehe ... good entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and has a funny ending.
Good luck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Hehehe ... good entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and has a funny ending.
Good luck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy. I appreciate it.
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. There was a man in Australia who used to go uninvited to people's weddings. He would line up for a photo with them and everything. Then he went too far and boasted online that he had been to more than a hundred weddings in a fairly short space of time. Caught himself out. Great story. Well written too. Very best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Well done. There was a man in Australia who used to go uninvited to people's weddings. He would line up for a photo with them and everything. Then he went too far and boasted online that he had been to more than a hundred weddings in a fairly short space of time. Caught himself out. Great story. Well written too. Very best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you , Wendy.
Always appreciated.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a well written, humorous story. Todd wasn't just a party animal, he was a party crasher. He ate well, danced, socialized with the grooms parents, and had an overall good time. Did he bring the married couple a gift? Probably not. Great 50 word humorous story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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This is a well written, humorous story. Todd wasn't just a party animal, he was a party crasher. He ate well, danced, socialized with the grooms parents, and had an overall good time. Did he bring the married couple a gift? Probably not. Great 50 word humorous story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you,LJ. Always appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that happens both at weddings and funerals. People love a party and they do crash them and enjoy themselves immensely. I liked that he chose the "cousins'" table. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Yes, that happens both at weddings and funerals. People love a party and they do crash them and enjoy themselves immensely. I liked that he chose the "cousins'" table. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Gotta sit with the cousins!
Thank you for reading.
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, the wedding crasher is busted. But, he got to enjoy the food and the dancing and fooled everyone for most of the evening. Who knows, maybe they will adopt him.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Oh, the wedding crasher is busted. But, he got to enjoy the food and the dancing and fooled everyone for most of the evening. Who knows, maybe they will adopt him.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Debi for the best wishes.
