Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha, did Crystal even know what was really going on?
I enjoyed your fun story, Jessica. You did a great job with
your word choices in the limited number allowed. Your words
were descriptive. I could easily picture this happening.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Jan! I'm so glad you enjoyed ditzy Crystal! Haha

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

We have a DG at nine! A good answer for trouble possibly that was making the noise at Charlie's pub. How many of us hope that when we go into a night club or any kind of facility, we have a peaceful night instead of a disturbance.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your review!

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This Crystal must have been really switched on to either deflect the police about the fight or certainly quite the ditzy hostess informing them of a 9pm DJ. Either way, it made for a memorable story :-) Best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your feedback!
:)
Jessica

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was so funny, but I bet the police didn't think so!! LOL. That was a great entry for the Humorous 50 word contest, and you managed to write a little story with only those few words. Well done. I wish you loads of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Sandra!
<3
Jessica

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This humorous fifty-word story, Oh, Crystal, has the proper word count and finds the most clueless hostess to run the roughest grog garden in the village. Set 'em up.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thanks Bill, this was a fun one!
<3
Jessica

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid story showing how ditzy Crystal could be. I do not get how the visual fits the story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hehehe ... Great entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.

The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and has a funny ending.

Good luck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thanks, Gypsy! This was a fun one!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Lol. Ditzy for sure. Well written story and there is a good finish to it. Good choice of image too! Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much , Wendy! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review and well wishes. <3

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, she had to make it sound like it was a good place to come to. She obviously thought the police wanted to know what activities awaited them other than the fight. Lol. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

lol exactly! Thanks so much for your review. <3

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

In a way you have to admire her dedication to the job, however, she doesn't put things into context. Of course the police would like details about the activity going on right now.
Good luck in the contest with your humorous tale.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! I appreciate your well wishes and feedback!