Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Hahaha! You did it. This short 50 word story is creative and humorous. Crystal may have been ditzy, but she was also positive. Her first thoughts were about the planned entertainment, not the current fight. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it:)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

You gave me a good chuckle. I've played a ditz a time or two. You did a great job, and I liked your humorous post. Good luck in the contest, and have a great day. Shirley

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you, Shirley!!

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

OMG...Crystal!!! I thing she is fit for the job, for sure. So much confidence and composure!!! I like the subtleness of the story.
I wish you good luck for the contest!!
mario

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you, Mario!
<3

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Crystal did do good. I get the feeling you are Australian from your sense of humour and use of the term pub. Loved your story and your sense of humour. A fun read to start this morning. J

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much!! :)

reply by JT traveller on 25-Mar-2023

😊👍

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, I loved this post as this girl remains professional even when there is a crisis going on! This post is funny and I am still laughing, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is a cute and creative short story. You have managed to tell a complete story with fifty words. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much!
:)

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a short short story that seems to qualify well for the humorous 50 word story prompt. It sounds like it could have been a 'blonde' joke, but there was no specification of hair color. Good luck in this contest!

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you! It appreciate your feedback!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Crystal's got her priorities straight--she's plugging the club. The policeman/policewoman should have been more explicit in his question! :)
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

lol for sure. Thank you for your feedback!!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Crystal is one smart lady. She has a quiet and quick sense of humor and knows how to hang on to her new job. A fun story. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I can easily visualize this scene at the pub where Ditzystarted her new job.
Great name chosen--Ditzy. She certainly acts that way when she responds to the police.
Great closer!
Rod

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you, Rod!! :)