Glorious Green
So serene11 total reviews
Comment from Julie Lau
Well done with your rhyming poem and congratulations on winning the contest. Just one thing; put a flying comma (what DO you call those things?) in front if you want to say 'cause, as it stands for the missing letters BE in because. Cheers, JL
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Well done with your rhyming poem and congratulations on winning the contest. Just one thing; put a flying comma (what DO you call those things?) in front if you want to say 'cause, as it stands for the missing letters BE in because. Cheers, JL
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thanknyou for this nice review and the correction...I can't believe I missed that. :)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem with its green palette shows how much you love this color and how many beautiful hues of it you see in nature. It is a hopeful and serene color.
Good luck with the promp.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Hi
This poem with its green palette shows how much you love this color and how many beautiful hues of it you see in nature. It is a hopeful and serene color.
Good luck with the promp.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
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No problem, Sharon.
Joan
Comment from RodG
I had not thought how much I like green until I read your poem. What do I look forward to most in Spring? The new green growth. Although I am not a fan of AABB rhyming, I enjoyed your poem very much. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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I had not thought how much I like green until I read your poem. What do I look forward to most in Spring? The new green growth. Although I am not a fan of AABB rhyming, I enjoyed your poem very much. Rod
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Gina Schneller
This is so great! So clever. Your work made me smile and giggle! Just what I needed today! Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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This is so great! So clever. Your work made me smile and giggle! Just what I needed today! Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Green as a colour has great resonance with me because after spending near Africa and I welcome the green friends in England and I enjoyed your bright vibrant poem for the contest here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Green as a colour has great resonance with me because after spending near Africa and I welcome the green friends in England and I enjoyed your bright vibrant poem for the contest here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this terrific review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like all the shades of green in nature, but I find it is a color that is hard to replicate with paint, etc. It's not my favorite color (I don't look good in green) but I do find it soothing. The first glimpses of green each Spring are up-lifting. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I like all the shades of green in nature, but I find it is a color that is hard to replicate with paint, etc. It's not my favorite color (I don't look good in green) but I do find it soothing. The first glimpses of green each Spring are up-lifting. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I don't look good in green either...oh, the irony of it all! I still love the color though..lol. Thanks for this great review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Now here is a writer that receive the suggestion re: this contest. Well done. It was fun to read, and insightfully keen of you. Good luck.
Now to find a few more characters so the CEC doesn't ask for my license and registration.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Now here is a writer that receive the suggestion re: this contest. Well done. It was fun to read, and insightfully keen of you. Good luck.
Now to find a few more characters so the CEC doesn't ask for my license and registration.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Nicki Nance
Makes me happy, too. I love the kaleidoscope graphic. You breathed a lot of life into the words as well. You made great choices that described your experiences. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Makes me happy, too. I love the kaleidoscope graphic. You breathed a lot of life into the words as well. You made great choices that described your experiences. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this great review. The irony of it is...I look terrible in the color green. :)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Excellent job of describing all the reasons and ways you love the color green. It skips along at a nice pace and the rhyming is spot on. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Excellent job of describing all the reasons and ways you love the color green. It skips along at a nice pace and the rhyming is spot on. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reading my poem.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a great entry for this contest. Your use of the colour you chose is very effective. So many things in our world are green, and we are all anxiously awaiting the green grass to appear.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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What a great entry for this contest. Your use of the colour you chose is very effective. So many things in our world are green, and we are all anxiously awaiting the green grass to appear.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for such a nice review.:)
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You are welcome
