Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Majestic Cranes Rising"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent modern tanka. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent modern tanka. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your brought something Japanese here in your Tanka with the crimson rising sun and those cranes flying by in synchronised formation, much enjoyed Eugene, love Dolly x
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Your brought something Japanese here in your Tanka with the crimson rising sun and those cranes flying by in synchronised formation, much enjoyed Eugene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from patcelaw
Enjoy this very much. It is a good entry for the club event. I especially enjoyed the alliteration of the S in your words that you chose to use. Patricia.
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Enjoy this very much. It is a good entry for the club event. I especially enjoyed the alliteration of the S in your words that you chose to use. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023