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Seasons of Change

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A collection of 30 poems in thirty days

24 total reviews 
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi JLR, This sound very interesting and knowing your previous styles and great posts I believe your April challenge will provide us with some nice work, so I shall keep an eye out for your work.
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Chris, thank you.
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hello there my friend.

That sounds like a very interesting subject. I look forward to reading you.

Good luck and most of all have fun!

-Kerry

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Kerry, thank you.
reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Apr-2023
    You're welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Hi Jim. Pleased you made it this year, I look forwards to the fun and games of this ambitious and wide-ranging project you have laid out before us. I wish you all the energy and inspiration needed to get through April. kay

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you Kay! The the fun begin...Good success to you also. Jim
Comment from Wendy G
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That does sound most interesting! I will look forward to seeing your poems, as I think you have chosen a great topic, and there will be plenty of scope for great creativity. Best wishes for your project.
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Thank you Wendy!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Hey J, this looks like it will be an interesting NaPo series. I like the idea of the seasons going through life phases.

Somehow your book didn't end up in the contest though. So you might want to check with Helen or Tom to figure out how to transfer this.

Also one small typo here:

My ojective (objective) is to write about

Wishing you a happy April of poetry.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Good catch, thank you Gloria.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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cool. I am setting up my book today as well. last year I wrote about 400 poems in APril, this year I will probably write about 100 only doing one or two prompts per day plus my usual two or three poems per day.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    My Gracious Jake you are so much more proflifc than I am. These numbers are beyond impressive.
Comment from harmony13
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The words flow and connect well. I like the topics the author chose
to write on. Writing about change is unique and thought provoking.
Thank you for the author's notes - it certainly sounds like a challenging
project and interesting way to write the poems. The artwork is awesome!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is quite a challenge you set for yourself. I do not write poetry, but I know this is no small feat.
I wish you all the luck to reach your goal.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Mary, thanks for the acknowledgement of the task.
Comment from jmdg1954
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I don't write poetry, but even the thought of writing thirty short stories, 75-150 words daily for thirty days, sounds like a real challenge. I applaud you for the undertaking, and I will drop in daily to read and encourage.
Good luck...
John

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Thank you for consideration. Your comments will be helpful.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I applaud your noble ambition. I've started several Aprils with grandiose ideas of writing a poem a day, and somehow I've failed every time! I ga along pretty well for about seven days--then try to play catch-up! (You need in 'experience' after the 'p.') I like the areas you have chosen.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thank you, good catch Verna!
reply by Verna Cole Mitchell on 31-Mar-2023
    Did you see mine : ga for go! Ha!