Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Laughter's Smile"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice humor haiku, I love the picture. Good syllables count but no connection between lines, it sounds like a list. I suggest connecting the first and second line and a dash at end of second line.
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Nice humor haiku, I love the picture. Good syllables count but no connection between lines, it sounds like a list. I suggest connecting the first and second line and a dash at end of second line.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute senyru you have penned with humor in it. What an adorable picture you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very cute senyru you have penned with humor in it. What an adorable picture you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This picture is magical and your words bring laughter to life here as when we laugh the whole room is buzzing with joy, I loved your endearing words here Eugene, love Dolly x
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This picture is magical and your words bring laughter to life here as when we laugh the whole room is buzzing with joy, I loved your endearing words here Eugene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
