Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Hand in Hand"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. There's very little to comment on so what follows is an attempt to meet the requirements of FanStory's CEC. They are sticklers that 150 characters be used regardless of the form written.
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Well done. There's very little to comment on so what follows is an attempt to meet the requirements of FanStory's CEC. They are sticklers that 150 characters be used regardless of the form written.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hello there! Your poem is beautiful. I think you hit the topic right on target and I really enjoyed reading. My favorite lines are,
"The salty breeze whispers in our ears,
A melody of love, so pure and clear,"
Thank you so much for sharing with us all!
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Hello there! Your poem is beautiful. I think you hit the topic right on target and I really enjoyed reading. My favorite lines are,
"The salty breeze whispers in our ears,
A melody of love, so pure and clear,"
Thank you so much for sharing with us all!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
Comment from heavenempress
Excellent type of poetry and we'll thought out. I liked the style, prompt but full of meaning and it makes love so beautiful. I highly recommend it to others. Let love live with no signs of heartaches
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Excellent type of poetry and we'll thought out. I liked the style, prompt but full of meaning and it makes love so beautiful. I highly recommend it to others. Let love live with no signs of heartaches
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
