Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 127 "~ Winter Night ~"Romantic Tanka Poems
18 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad poem about loss and grief and it is hard parting with possessions of someone who was once close to us, a poignant write, full of sorrow here as we move on with life, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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This is a sad poem about loss and grief and it is hard parting with possessions of someone who was once close to us, a poignant write, full of sorrow here as we move on with life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Dolly,
thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and the kind words. I am happy you like it :) Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
We own a very highly strung Moodle dog, he can't stop yipping in the car, but we've learned that putting Elaine's dressing grow on the seat calms home down. Well done, excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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We own a very highly strung Moodle dog, he can't stop yipping in the car, but we've learned that putting Elaine's dressing grow on the seat calms home down. Well done, excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy, I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Well done
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a statement of loss and missing your loved one.
Well done.
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I've gotten a lot of my suits from places that clothing is donated from dead people.
I really don't mind wearing non-new clothing.
And of course, I've donated quite a lot myself through the years, especially when my wife passed.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This is a statement of loss and missing your loved one.
Well done.
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I've gotten a lot of my suits from places that clothing is donated from dead people.
I really don't mind wearing non-new clothing.
And of course, I've donated quite a lot myself through the years, especially when my wife passed.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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I like going to thrift stores and peruse around.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good sensory appeal, and this is a poem that many will/can relate to. Of special note:
I cuddle with the sweater
(G, I'm sure that many people have done this. Also, food for thought:
"your" sweater vs. "the" sweater. Perhaps, "the" is better for alliteration purposes. I'm more of a visual gal. Lol.)
Well done. Excellent photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good sensory appeal, and this is a poem that many will/can relate to. Of special note:
I cuddle with the sweater
(G, I'm sure that many people have done this. Also, food for thought:
"your" sweater vs. "the" sweater. Perhaps, "the" is better for alliteration purposes. I'm more of a visual gal. Lol.)
Well done. Excellent photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing.
Xo. M
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the feedback, it's good but it's not what I mean. The ''yours'' let people know that she is missing one specific person.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have an awesome day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My mom still has Dad's special chair. She swears she sometimes sees Dad still sitting in it. I am betting he does. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It caused me to think of Dad.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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My mom still has Dad's special chair. She swears she sometimes sees Dad still sitting in it. I am betting he does. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It caused me to think of Dad.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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That's wonderful. The ones we love remain in our hearts.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jessizero
This was sweet, sad, and sentimental. I enjoyed reading your poem. You expressed your emotions well. I know what it's like to donate a deceased loved one's belongings to Goodwill. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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This was sweet, sad, and sentimental. I enjoyed reading your poem. You expressed your emotions well. I know what it's like to donate a deceased loved one's belongings to Goodwill. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like the sentiment expressed in your poem. Sadly, that scent will fade with age. Good image and author note make for a good presentation.
Edit suggestion: ... still holds (sic) your ...
Mark
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Gypsy,
Do like the sentiment expressed in your poem. Sadly, that scent will fade with age. Good image and author note make for a good presentation.
Edit suggestion: ... still holds (sic) your ...
Mark
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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good suggestion
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have an awesome day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for the notes.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the winter night very well.
-The emotion comes through with keeping the one
sweater that was special to her, and the rest of
the clothing went to Goodwill.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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-Nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for the notes.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the winter night very well.
-The emotion comes through with keeping the one
sweater that was special to her, and the rest of
the clothing went to Goodwill.
-Well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Perfectly composed yet balanced so well between sadness and good deeds.
The overall presentation and image suit the solemn occasion.
Much can be conveyed with a concise and effective poem.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Perfectly composed yet balanced so well between sadness and good deeds.
The overall presentation and image suit the solemn occasion.
Much can be conveyed with a concise and effective poem.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Awe... Gypsy that's so beautifully sad ð??¢
This is a lovely piece you've penned.
I love your artwork as well, Great overall presentation as well.
-Kerry
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Awe... Gypsy that's so beautifully sad ð??¢
This is a lovely piece you've penned.
I love your artwork as well, Great overall presentation as well.
-Kerry
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Kerry. I appreciate your time and excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome. Hugs
