Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Golden Crowns"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
4 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent haiku for the club event..
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent haiku for the club event..
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
wow this was a great way to describe chrysanthemums!
love the idea of petals unfolding amidst autumn hues! very cool wording!
nicely done - i have no suggestions
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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wow this was a great way to describe chrysanthemums!
love the idea of petals unfolding amidst autumn hues! very cool wording!
nicely done - i have no suggestions
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a gorgeous beautiful and stunning poem amazing work and great job!
It's a beautiful and light poem that touches on screen time and renewal and growth! Along with the gorgeous picture it makes this I very well rounded extremely well done and lovely and gorgeous poem. So I lovely package you have created. I see No issues with grammar, Sentence structure or grammar.
Very well done thank you for this submission. I look forward to your next one have a great evening!
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This is a gorgeous beautiful and stunning poem amazing work and great job!
It's a beautiful and light poem that touches on screen time and renewal and growth! Along with the gorgeous picture it makes this I very well rounded extremely well done and lovely and gorgeous poem. So I lovely package you have created. I see No issues with grammar, Sentence structure or grammar.
Very well done thank you for this submission. I look forward to your next one have a great evening!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You are on a path to somewhere I hadn't seen you previously. I like this short, which I rarely do. Is it a Zinnia ? Out of season but what the hay. Well done.
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You are on a path to somewhere I hadn't seen you previously. I like this short, which I rarely do. Is it a Zinnia ? Out of season but what the hay. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
