I hate Mondays
Such heavy work3 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and I used to look forward to the weekends when I worked the 9-5 all week and now that I am retired I still enjoy my weekend as I always spend it at home, you made me smile with this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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This is a fun write and I used to look forward to the weekends when I worked the 9-5 all week and now that I am retired I still enjoy my weekend as I always spend it at home, you made me smile with this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from JT traveller
Haha. Your sense of humour really shines through in this piece of writing. From the choice of illustration to the words of your poem. The icing on the cake, the almost childish nature of the final word! And in capitals. I like it.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Haha. Your sense of humour really shines through in this piece of writing. From the choice of illustration to the words of your poem. The icing on the cake, the almost childish nature of the final word! And in capitals. I like it.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much. I?m glad we share the same sense of Humour.
Comment from Yardier
Carry that load, boss. You can do it!
Fine explanation of labor of life.
I wonder though, you've got fourteen words but I'm not counting seven lines.
Still, it's a fine little ditty.
All the best, Yard.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Carry that load, boss. You can do it!
Fine explanation of labor of life.
I wonder though, you've got fourteen words but I'm not counting seven lines.
Still, it's a fine little ditty.
All the best, Yard.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thanks for reviewing and pointing out the mistake. I?ve just pointed this out to another entrant that hadn?t read the rules.