Reviews from

Tanka Collection

Viewing comments for Chapter 130 "Raging Autumn Gale "
Romantic Tanka Poems

8 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Congratulations.
So artfully crafted and beautifully presented.
This style is certainly a medium to showcase your talent.
I applaud you.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much! I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"Raging Autumn Gale"
Nice Art was also well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
...
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Ccontents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much! I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This was a wonderful Gogyohka, Gypsy. The picture was so delightful that it captured the essence of your words. I loved your words because they were so simple and very true. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Another fine poem, Gypsy, one equating love/lust with stomy weather. My love live equates yo the blizzard of 1876, a deep freeze of nothing. And te forecast is more of the same!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Mike, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy
reply by Mike Stevens on 08-Apr-2023
    Could my spelling GET any worse? When I use my tablet to type, this mess is the result; and I'm too impatient to proofread before I push send
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This one-sided love deserves the harsh words, raging, blasts, and blazing. These words set the mood perfectly as they turn to ashes. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing. As usual the presentation is perfect.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

i love the words raging, blasts, blazing, and longing in this gogyohka - and then your ending line went perfectly with them

great work! thank you for sharing it

shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I like your Gogyohka poem- poem flows well - tells a story of emotional conflict- raging Gale - dark dank moor on one side - while at the same time remembering a beautiful peaceful sunset setting -your heart aflame- even in the ashes of a tragic one sided experience- I like the dimensionality- realistic- where life sometimes takes us - good job AP

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thank you, AP, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ah, that is painful to have a "one-sided love." But since it is already in ashes, perhaps the "blazing sunset" will burn it down and bring relief in the morning with a fresh view after being released from it.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    yes, you are right. From the ashes the phoenix is reborn.

    Thank you, big sister, I appreciate your kind review.

    love,
    marival