Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Midnight's Afterglow"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
5 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have done good sensory work. The reader will be drawn in to move into a meditative state with the words you've chosen. Your use of personification or animation enhances the message. Nice work.
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You have done good sensory work. The reader will be drawn in to move into a meditative state with the words you've chosen. Your use of personification or animation enhances the message. Nice work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely septolet so smoothly and skilfully expressed in this particular verse form in which you seem to excel. The picture completes an impressive presentation. You should be proud. Well done! Debbie
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A lovely septolet so smoothly and skilfully expressed in this particular verse form in which you seem to excel. The picture completes an impressive presentation. You should be proud. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent Septolet poem for the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines Thank you for participating in our club. Nice presentation and words that create a concrete mental picture. Well done.
NOTICE: There are two forms of Septolet, syllables based, and a word base. There are both fine but I am keeping the word form for future use. I edited the event. Your post is fine the way it is. I apologize for the confusion.
Gypsy
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Excellent Septolet poem for the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines Thank you for participating in our club. Nice presentation and words that create a concrete mental picture. Well done.
NOTICE: There are two forms of Septolet, syllables based, and a word base. There are both fine but I am keeping the word form for future use. I edited the event. Your post is fine the way it is. I apologize for the confusion.
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
There is a lovely evocative use of language here. The words seem as delicate as the images they describe. Well done and good luck in the contest. All the best, Julie Lau
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There is a lovely evocative use of language here. The words seem as delicate as the images they describe. Well done and good luck in the contest. All the best, Julie Lau
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
Comment from JT traveller
I can only assume this poem is about an indigo hued flower? I really enjoyed your word choice and the layout of the poem. It had a pleasing symmetry. Best of luck in the competition. J
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I can only assume this poem is about an indigo hued flower? I really enjoyed your word choice and the layout of the poem. It had a pleasing symmetry. Best of luck in the competition. J
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
