Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Happiness is..."A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a good topic to raise awareness about happiness. Is made a good point here and a lot of people may not even think of happiness in the Way You Are presenting it. I agree with you that it is much deeper than just getting what you want it goes to the soul.
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This is a good topic to raise awareness about happiness. Is made a good point here and a lot of people may not even think of happiness in the Way You Are presenting it. I agree with you that it is much deeper than just getting what you want it goes to the soul.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
Comment from mrsmajor
Indeed, happiness is all that you have said, so well, and more...Thanks for sharing this with us.
"A heavenly gift you willfully let be your special guide...My favorite line...
All the best,
Warmly,
Victoria
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Indeed, happiness is all that you have said, so well, and more...Thanks for sharing this with us.
"A heavenly gift you willfully let be your special guide...My favorite line...
All the best,
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your version of what happiness is here and I champion your feelings and happiness is something we hold within and no one can take it away from us, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
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I enjoyed your version of what happiness is here and I champion your feelings and happiness is something we hold within and no one can take it away from us, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Very good poem about Happiness. As I was reading I was thinking, "This is lovely, I wish it could go on, forever;" and it did. lol :)) it's wonderful how many any beautiful lines you were able to add, making the entire piece just seem, so full of happiness.
Fun Fact? I had a ferret in 1988, and I actually named my ferret, "Happiness."
I think your writing was very clever, creative, rhymes and metaphors flowed well, and was full of Joy. Thank you for sharing. ,:)?
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Very good poem about Happiness. As I was reading I was thinking, "This is lovely, I wish it could go on, forever;" and it did. lol :)) it's wonderful how many any beautiful lines you were able to add, making the entire piece just seem, so full of happiness.
Fun Fact? I had a ferret in 1988, and I actually named my ferret, "Happiness."
I think your writing was very clever, creative, rhymes and metaphors flowed well, and was full of Joy. Thank you for sharing. ,:)?
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
