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An April Fool

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NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Interesting. I didn't know. After reading this, I want to learn more. It's clearly written, you provided a link to more information, and your writing invites people to learn more about this topic. Good work.! :))

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Great fun and very clever and informative. I thought for a moment it was a joke but your notes helpfully explain. I love the "tippy, tippy top" and the enjoyment you obviously had bringing enjoyment to others in this lovely free verse. Good image too. Well done, Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! They have cell service from Mount Everest? How cool is that? Now if there is someone who is having a heart attack or there's an avalanche, they can call for help. Great information in your poem!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

Comment from country ranch writer
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This set up and presentation was so cute!
You never know how far some cell phones can reach in any locations. I can get service when my son can't when I am the woods his cell tower doesn't pick up his phone but mine die amazing I think!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Sometimes our cell phones don't work and we cannot get a signal, what's that all about? I enjoyed your tribute to the phone and I actually like turning mine off! Ha ha ha, great poem Alicia, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

Comment from kiwisteveh
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An informative little piece although I'm going to question the accuracy - the very first cellphone call has been in the news since it was apparently made exactly fifty years ago i.e. April 1973

I didn't know that Everest had service and Google tells me it is only at the base camp, not at the top! However, my own cell phone provider is planning to have 'universal' coverage by next year by connecting to Elon Musk's Starlink satellites.

I liked your chatty little poem, though, especially the cheeky ending.

Steve

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023