Comment from Peitho

Exceptional

I appreciate this...when I read it, it made me think of being stuck in a cycle that you want to get out of but at the same time it feels familiar and there is comfort in that.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

It's wonderful that a reviewer not only reads my work but is able to fully understand.
Thanks for sharing your time and your sister review is much appreciated.
Doctor Ricky

reply by Peitho on 22-Jun-2023

Of course! :)

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

The path is long and awkward.
yes. yes, it is.
very long
very awkward
with many twists and turns

excellent poem
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you Very much and have a blessed day.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Your author notes has an error Don Jesus instead of Son Jesus. Sorry, for your pain. I suspect you have counseled with your bishop or social services? Have a better day.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thanks Tom.
I caught that error a couple hours probably after you reviewed it.
As for misery and pain?
Well it's just part of normal "Game of Life."
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"