Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Mangoes "A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
3 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there my friend. Checking out NaPoWriMo posts,
I love this magically juicy yummy piece of work.
Great job - look forward to catching up with other posts.
Kerry
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Hello there my friend. Checking out NaPoWriMo posts,
I love this magically juicy yummy piece of work.
Great job - look forward to catching up with other posts.
Kerry
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
Comment from Teri7
This is a very tasty and good poem you have penned about Mangoes. It made me so hungry for one! Beautiful picture of a ripe and juicy mango. You used great descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very tasty and good poem you have penned about Mangoes. It made me so hungry for one! Beautiful picture of a ripe and juicy mango. You used great descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a strong sensory poem. We've colors, sounds and tastes. The alliterative s's surround the reader in the sounds of biting into a mango, with the juices spraying every which way.This is well done.
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This is a strong sensory poem. We've colors, sounds and tastes. The alliterative s's surround the reader in the sounds of biting into a mango, with the juices spraying every which way.This is well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
