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Comment from Diana Harris
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I really enjoyed your use of color to enhance the different seasons here. A walk through the year and the journey of faith is well described. It brings to mind a song, "I Saw God Today" that reminds to look at our surroundings because He is everywhere if only we chose to see Him. Thank you. Diana

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
    Thank you so very much Diana. You are so kind and I appreciate your kind review and comments so much, my dear friend.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
This is a good poem of seasonal metaphor for staying faithful through the year.
I like the the font color matches the seasonal color in the beautiful artwork you chose to illustrate your words.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the conetest.
Joan

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This poem is fodder for further contemplation. Think of the seasons your faith has, is & will go through. The Native Americans look at their faith journey through the 4 directions and those are related to seasons.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem. I appreciate your sentiments that are so similar to mine, but absolutely love how you explain it thru the eyes of Native Americans. And also for reviewing so much of mine! I just love you pieces!
reply by Liz O'Neill on 24-Apr-2023
    ***Warm hugs***
Comment from Carlos' girl
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Well done. The illustration caught my eye; the verse was equally lovely. Very well done i find this is truly well crafted. The concept is conveyed eloquently through the graphics as well

Judith

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
    Judith, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my faith poem. Also for the lovely extra stars. Also it is so good to hear from you again. In June, after I have two eye surgeries, I hope to be reviewing again more and cannot wait to get your way more again.
    As always, you are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
reply by Carlos' girl on 20-Apr-2023
    I hope your eye surgeries were successful and you are doing well. Take care and thank you for your thoughtful reply.

    Judith
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Thanks again Judith and surgeries are scheduled for June 14 & 28th.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Well sis, there you go again incorporating two of your passions into a ribbon of linguistic art. The two passions identify the strength of your spirit, both god and poetry. You have incorporated the beauty of nature that God is created for us in the four seasons with a beautiful picture. Thanks for reminding us again that god is good all the time and all the time God is good spring, summer, fall, and winter.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
    Just as soon as I have another nomination vote to give, you will be my first. You are so thoughtful and kind and I can't tell you how much I appreciate your awesome reviews and all the stars. Yes, God and poetry are my passion, as well as family. And you dear bro are the best.
reply by Dr. Nad on 22-Apr-2023
    You're very welcome Debbie. I'm just here for maybe 20 minutes tonight and then going on to something else. I have been nominated a couple of times in my life for reviewer, but I'm not aware of ever coming close to winning. But it doesn't matter, it's the thought that counts so thanks for the kind words. I've got to go and look and see if there's anything you've written I haven't commented on. L.O.L.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful poem and a beautifully, artistic presentation. Your colorful artwork intensifies your message of faith. No matter the season, as you have so rhythmically stated, we can place our trust in our loving God. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind words for my faith poem.
Comment from pome lover
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Lovely, Debi, and neat how you formatted the font colors with the seasons.
Your faith sounds very strong, and I'm sure accounts for that happy smile on you face. Beautifully written and obviously felt.
Congratulations on getting All Time Best.
Katharine

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind words for my faith poem
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very beautiful and well written six star poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive and so true words. That was a good song from a good time in life! Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Teri, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my faith poem. Also for the lovely extra stars.
    As always, you are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.

reply by Teri7 on 20-Apr-2023
    you are loved dear friend by the One Who set us free and you are a true blessing to me and so many on here! May God bless you and your family always! love, Teri😊💕
Comment from Aussie
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The four seasons as mentioned in the Bible. Great presentation using colors for each season. Faith knows no boundaries, we are the ones who need to hand over the reins to our Lord and Master for He made us whole. K xx

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
    Aussie, you sweetheart. Thank you for the kind words and the awesome stars. I appreciate so much for this lovely review package! Hugs! Debi
Comment from gudbjorg
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Dear Debi, I love this poem and the clever way in which you portray the different seasons and seasons of life. It's filled with faith and encourages the reader.
The poem flows well and has a lovely rhyme. Thank you so much for posting it. God bless you! Guðbjörg

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023