Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Sun Infused Thoughts"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is joyful and the image perfect and, because of the lovely sentiments of optimism and inspiration (love "stirring my ideas with its gilded charm"), I'm awarding it 5 stars. But - and I'm a hard taskmaster - still think your verses could have even better impact if shorter and with more flowing rhythm. You tend to want to pack in too much and lose something in the process. Best wishes, Debbie
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This is joyful and the image perfect and, because of the lovely sentiments of optimism and inspiration (love "stirring my ideas with its gilded charm"), I'm awarding it 5 stars. But - and I'm a hard taskmaster - still think your verses could have even better impact if shorter and with more flowing rhythm. You tend to want to pack in too much and lose something in the process. Best wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very optimistic, happy, and hopeful poem.its so important to a feeling or gratitude and and inner positivity. Your images works well with your descriptive words. Good writing! :))
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This is a very optimistic, happy, and hopeful poem.its so important to a feeling or gratitude and and inner positivity. Your images works well with your descriptive words. Good writing! :))
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
