Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Excellent! I wondered where this was going and was so pleasantly surprised at the end. Clever, witty and a great contender for the contest. Good luck, Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thank you for the great review, Debbie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.

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Ron

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun play on words here as we are reminded of one of Shakespeare's plays here in your final question, I wish you luck with the contest, an amusing and entertaining write, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a fun, creative piece! I especially liked that last line - it was quite the payoff. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you for the great review, Jessi. I really appreciate the stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.