What The Hell!?
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Comment from T B Botts
Wow, talk about a rude awakening! Well done on this story. I'm from the old school I guess, I never had any interest in taking any kind of drug aside from nicotine. I suppose that was addictive enough that it scared me away from trying anything else. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Wow, talk about a rude awakening! Well done on this story. I'm from the old school I guess, I never had any interest in taking any kind of drug aside from nicotine. I suppose that was addictive enough that it scared me away from trying anything else. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I'm old school as well, I wish we could go back to those times. Thanks for reading my story. :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
You set a mysterious and dark scene with this piece that creeps slowly into the reader's mind. Creating illusions of fantasy and unbalanced dreams, leaving the reader feeling lost.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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You set a mysterious and dark scene with this piece that creeps slowly into the reader's mind. Creating illusions of fantasy and unbalanced dreams, leaving the reader feeling lost.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this terrific review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, this is pretty intense... I like it.
Good flash fiction entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt contest. You followed the rules and developed an interesting story.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Wow, this is pretty intense... I like it.
Good flash fiction entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt contest. You followed the rules and developed an interesting story.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, creepy, but very well told. You had only seventy-five words but you did a good job setting the stage and giving your reader a glimpse of his bad decision. I laughed at the end because it caught me by surprise. Nice job. Terry.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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LOL, creepy, but very well told. You had only seventy-five words but you did a good job setting the stage and giving your reader a glimpse of his bad decision. I laughed at the end because it caught me by surprise. Nice job. Terry.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thanks for this terrific review and for taking time out to read my story.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a surprising ending. He had a weapon with him in his coffin. Ouch! He evidently was protecting himself from the monsters underground. Drugs can take you on a trip when you get high, that's what they say anyway. I don't know myself.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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what a surprising ending. He had a weapon with him in his coffin. Ouch! He evidently was protecting himself from the monsters underground. Drugs can take you on a trip when you get high, that's what they say anyway. I don't know myself.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for reading my story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this is a chilling write and scary too, a vivid picture painted of the terror in drug addiction and the only path is towards death, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Oh my goodness, this is a chilling write and scary too, a vivid picture painted of the terror in drug addiction and the only path is towards death, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Really great story suspenseful to the end with a terrific ending!! The writing style is unobstructed and simple.
I really enjoyed it
Good luck for the contest!!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Really great story suspenseful to the end with a terrific ending!! The writing style is unobstructed and simple.
I really enjoyed it
Good luck for the contest!!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Your story presents a dark reality for many drug users, and they have no awareness of the arrival of death, nor of its finality. Well written, with graphic detail. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Your story presents a dark reality for many drug users, and they have no awareness of the arrival of death, nor of its finality. Well written, with graphic detail. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is dark and compelling. I felt as though I was under the overpass taking it all in. The surprise ending is brilliantly written. Thank you for the great read.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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This is dark and compelling. I felt as though I was under the overpass taking it all in. The surprise ending is brilliantly written. Thank you for the great read.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)