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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "No Room for Halloween in Spring"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Sally Law
I couldn't agree more, mystery poet. One Halloween is more than enough. The devil gets his own holiday. I agree Spring and Easter are for Jesus and Christmas too, as He is central to those celebrated holidays.
Thank you for sharing, and my very best for the contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxos
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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I couldn't agree more, mystery poet. One Halloween is more than enough. The devil gets his own holiday. I agree Spring and Easter are for Jesus and Christmas too, as He is central to those celebrated holidays.
Thank you for sharing, and my very best for the contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxos
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks
Sally, I maybe got carried away with this, as I do enjoy the fun of Halloween, just as I do Christmas and Easter. Just don't like gory or on the ones that are about Jesus, I hate to see Him forgotten. And thanks for the awesome review, words of kindness and six stars!
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I agree. I feel like Satan already gets enough attention and glory. You did great, mystery poet. My very best to you as always.
Sally :))
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I certainly agree we don't want duplicate holidays which all become more and more commercialised! You are right, we need more 'prophet' and less 'profit'!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I certainly agree we don't want duplicate holidays which all become more and more commercialised! You are right, we need more 'prophet' and less 'profit'!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Angel Debbie
Amen, I love this! It flows well and it basically made my heart sing along as I read. And certain parts I had to stop and say yes to like this line: The real one lives inside of you, He's called the Holy Ghost. Great write. Thank You for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Amen, I love this! It flows well and it basically made my heart sing along as I read. And certain parts I had to stop and say yes to like this line: The real one lives inside of you, He's called the Holy Ghost. Great write. Thank You for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much Debbie! I maybe got carried away with this, as I do enjoy the fun of Halloween, just as I do Christmas and Easter. Just don't like gory or on the ones that are about Jesus, I hate to see Him forgotten. And thanks for the awesome review, words of kindness and six stars!
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet!
This is such a clever piece for the Halloween in Spring contest. I suspect you will do quite well in the voting booth. The rhymes are smooth and the sentiment reads loud and clear!. I concur!
Kim
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hello Poet!
This is such a clever piece for the Halloween in Spring contest. I suspect you will do quite well in the voting booth. The rhymes are smooth and the sentiment reads loud and clear!. I concur!
Kim
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
This exceptional poem had to be written! This is a great ode to Jesus.
I, myself, used to live Halloween (til my teens), but I too hate all the gore of Halloween creatures, and the distracting bunnies (I would love one as a pet given to me any day but Easter.
Great point. I hope many people read this.
Good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Author,
This exceptional poem had to be written! This is a great ode to Jesus.
I, myself, used to live Halloween (til my teens), but I too hate all the gore of Halloween creatures, and the distracting bunnies (I would love one as a pet given to me any day but Easter.
Great point. I hope many people read this.
Good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks Cindy, I maybe got carried away with this, as I do enjoy the fun of Halloween, just as I do Christmas and Easter. Just don't like gory or on the ones that are about Jesus, I hate to see Him forgotten. And thanks for the awesome review, words of kindness and six stars!
Comment from mermaids
Excellent poem with some important points. I do think we should remember why we celebrate holidays, especially Easter and Christmas. I have a difficult time with Halloween in the spring, doesn't feel right. Your poetic form is smooth and your rhyming words give an almost musical feel to your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Excellent poem with some important points. I do think we should remember why we celebrate holidays, especially Easter and Christmas. I have a difficult time with Halloween in the spring, doesn't feel right. Your poetic form is smooth and your rhyming words give an almost musical feel to your poem.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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I thank you so very much for your kind review and understanding words for this poem. I certainly not here to put down any holiday and take away from the fun.
I love the fun ones too, but truthfully think we have too much violence and scary aspects in life and hate to give more of those ideas towards our children's future.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
That's a very bold piece of writing. And it's so true, thinking about it. I totally agree with you about the Halloween in whatever season, but it's about time to focus on the Truth and make Jesus the king of our hearts once for all!!
Lovely post!!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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That's a very bold piece of writing. And it's so true, thinking about it. I totally agree with you about the Halloween in whatever season, but it's about time to focus on the Truth and make Jesus the king of our hearts once for all!!
Lovely post!!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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I thank you so very much for your kind review and understanding words for this poem. I certainly not here to put down any holiday and take away from the fun.
I love the fun ones too, but truthfully think we have too much violence and scary aspects in life and hate to give more of those ideas towards our children's future.
Comment from royowen
The Bible doesn't give Jesus a holiday, He had a human birth by necessity, but we don't know the exact date, we gave Him a pagan festival birthdate instead, but God didn't allot Him one, because He had no beginning and no end, He is the eternal God and Lord. This is so beautifully written D, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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The Bible doesn't give Jesus a holiday, He had a human birth by necessity, but we don't know the exact date, we gave Him a pagan festival birthdate instead, but God didn't allot Him one, because He had no beginning and no end, He is the eternal God and Lord. This is so beautifully written D, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Hi Roy, I thank you so very much for your kind review and understanding words for this poem. I certainly not here to put down any holiday and take away from the fun.
I love the fun ones too, but truthfully think we have too much violence and scary aspects in life and hate to give more of those ideas towards our children's future.
Comment from w.j.debi
You make a good point about the holiday's not being celebrated for the correct reason. Those Halloween creatures such as zombies seem to be with us all year any more. Still, people like to dress up and so they love the costumes. Maybe we should do a famous historical figures day instead. LOL
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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You make a good point about the holiday's not being celebrated for the correct reason. Those Halloween creatures such as zombies seem to be with us all year any more. Still, people like to dress up and so they love the costumes. Maybe we should do a famous historical figures day instead. LOL
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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I thank you so very much for your kind review and understanding words for this poem. I certainly not here to put down any holiday and take away from the fun.
Hey Debi, I love the fun ones too, but truthfully think we have too much violence and scary aspects in life and hate to give more of those ideas towards our children's future.
Comment from evilynne
That it is a nicely written entry for this contest. It begins with the description of Halloween fun but points out that
Easter time has its own celebration and deeper meaning. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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That it is a nicely written entry for this contest. It begins with the description of Halloween fun but points out that
Easter time has its own celebration and deeper meaning. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Hi Evi, I thank you so very much for your kind review and understanding words for this poem. I certainly not here to put down any holiday and take away from the fun.
I love the fun ones too, but truthfully think we have too much violence and scary aspects in life and hate to give more of those ideas towards our children's future.
