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Comment from aryr
What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The pictures of the swimmer represented the calmness of the water and the coral showed the calmness that surrounded the water. Your words showed that there was a peacefulness. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The pictures of the swimmer represented the calmness of the water and the coral showed the calmness that surrounded the water. Your words showed that there was a peacefulness. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Right about now I would love to be at the Gulf and allowing waves to wash over my body. That would be perfect. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's making me want to join the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Right about now I would love to be at the Gulf and allowing waves to wash over my body. That would be perfect. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's making me want to join the poem.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem flows well- story connects nicely - the sea's color ,the subject, the wind and tide - smoothly presented - good satori- AP
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem flows well- story connects nicely - the sea's color ,the subject, the wind and tide - smoothly presented - good satori- AP
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i like that "wind surfs without a board" line.
a great tanka with excellent imagery, picture, and presentation
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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i like that "wind surfs without a board" line.
a great tanka with excellent imagery, picture, and presentation
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
there's so much to consider, but also love, reading this tanka poem.
Firstly, the visual takes you to a place of renewal; your first line sets the scene so perfectly, while the next line produces the nature of texture allowing one to feel the words... and yes, the ocean, tides, currents etc have their own rhythm that may change on a whim. The play on words within your last line sums it up beautifully.
Your trademark picture perfect presentation and construction always brings a higher level or appreciation.
Exceptionally Magic!
With our thoughts we create...
an ever changing rhythm.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
there's so much to consider, but also love, reading this tanka poem.
Firstly, the visual takes you to a place of renewal; your first line sets the scene so perfectly, while the next line produces the nature of texture allowing one to feel the words... and yes, the ocean, tides, currents etc have their own rhythm that may change on a whim. The play on words within your last line sums it up beautifully.
Your trademark picture perfect presentation and construction always brings a higher level or appreciation.
Exceptionally Magic!
With our thoughts we create...
an ever changing rhythm.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much James
You always writes these beautiful and incredibly insightful reviews that blow my mind. I appreciate you taking the time.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like the personification of the wind surfing without a board. To me the poem speaks more than about the wind and waves but about the mental struggles the narrator has about ambivalent feelings.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I like the personification of the wind surfing without a board. To me the poem speaks more than about the wind and waves but about the mental struggles the narrator has about ambivalent feelings.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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