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Acronyms

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You open with a strong simile. You have done a fine job with the Acrostic poem. It is a nice tribute to mothers who are worthy of it. My mother can be on your list of good mothers. Sadly, this a bitter day for some. Or time of grieving. We can have our gratefulness shine.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much for your time and continued support, I really appreciate your in-depth review.
    Sorry it took so long to respond
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reply by Liz O'Neill on 26-Apr-2023
    I've come down from 54 messages to 19. So I know people are behind also. I've noticed fewer are able to do a review of my chapters.
Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
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Great! You have a natural (Irish?) talent for creating acrostics.
I really liked, "Patiently Pleasing Year," "Offering Tomorrows,"
and "Discovering Another's Yearnings," something that would make our world a better place to live, if only more people would take the time and effort.
Glad to see you posting again, do you realize what therapy there is to be had in creative writing?
Loved this!
irish

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much for your time and continued support, I really appreciate your in-depth input.
    Darren
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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What mother would appreciate your words of praise arranged in this acrostic poem? The words you have chosen flow nicely, they don't seem forced as can happen with this type of poetry. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it.
    Sincerely,
    Darren
Comment from lyenochka
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Hi Darren! Good to see you back! Thank you for sharing your "yearnings" through this Mother's Day themed acrostic poem. We are thankful for all our moms and the nurturing God gives us through nature.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your review and continued support, I really appreciate you.