Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "My First Snowfall"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
5 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
I don't think you need to change a thing, Gene. This is such a cool poem. (No pun intended) We don't have a lot of snow around here, either. I remember a couple from when I was a kid and then a few more as we moved farther north in Texas. We had a snow-magedon a couple of years ago... Not fun!
I'm not a big fan of snow, but I love your poem about it.
Blessings and best,
Deb
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I don't think you need to change a thing, Gene. This is such a cool poem. (No pun intended) We don't have a lot of snow around here, either. I remember a couple from when I was a kid and then a few more as we moved farther north in Texas. We had a snow-magedon a couple of years ago... Not fun!
I'm not a big fan of snow, but I love your poem about it.
Blessings and best,
Deb
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. This submission should prove to so many wordsmiths-to be authors an over-the-top vocabulary is the key to poignant writing. You have taken me back to youthful innocence where a snowfall was exciting.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Well done. This submission should prove to so many wordsmiths-to be authors an over-the-top vocabulary is the key to poignant writing. You have taken me back to youthful innocence where a snowfall was exciting.
Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Tom,
Thank you for your 6 star review. I am honored that this poem has taken me back to youthful innocence where a snowfall was exciting.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very atmospheric! I could feel the refreshing chill through the image and your words and I like the contrasting imagery with your 'heart aglow.' There is that sense of purity and tranquillity with snowfall which you have captured so well. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Very atmospheric! I could feel the refreshing chill through the image and your words and I like the contrasting imagery with your 'heart aglow.' There is that sense of purity and tranquillity with snowfall which you have captured so well. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
Comment from patcelaw
I grew up in a country per area where we had snow. But after I move to California, we had very little snow ever so when we had the first snowfall after I moved to California in a city called Covina, California I experienced a snow fall after a number of years of not seeing the snow and I felt just like you did when you saw that your first novel. What a blessed one. Patricia.
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I grew up in a country per area where we had snow. But after I move to California, we had very little snow ever so when we had the first snowfall after I moved to California in a city called Covina, California I experienced a snow fall after a number of years of not seeing the snow and I felt just like you did when you saw that your first novel. What a blessed one. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to the snow and the joy of it, although snow is not something I love, there is fun to be had playing in it and you brought all that fun to life here, the metre is a little lumpy but the end rhymes are good, love Dolly x
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A fine tribute to the snow and the joy of it, although snow is not something I love, there is fun to be had playing in it and you brought all that fun to life here, the metre is a little lumpy but the end rhymes are good, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
